Take II indeed, after receiving this feedback:
I thought another attempt was in order, to better explain the challenges I'll be facing as a teacher in this technological trove of a century. Of course I still stand by all the statements mentioned in the last post, this is just a development upon those ideas (that idea?). Obviously now I've been submerged in the integration of education and technology I see more than simply one challenge and as proven in other parts of this website my presentation doesn't usually lack in effectiveness.